This week we had to read “Obama blames 'bad apple' insurers for canceled coverage,” which discusses how “bad apple” insurance companies are the reason for thousands of people losing their insurance in the past couple weeks. Obama states,"Remember, before the Affordable Care Act, these bad-apple insurers had free rein every single year to limit the care that you received, or used minor pre-existing conditions to jack up your premiums, or bill you into bankruptcy.” Obama states that those who have a hard time seeking new insurance plans after their coverage is dropped, they may find new options through online exchanges or marketplaces. Michigan Representative Fred Upton, the Republican who oversaw the hearing for Obamacare said,"For those who lose the coverage they like, they may also be losing faith in their government," I agree that people are losing faith in their government and if they do not make a decision on this debacle soon, then people won’t believe that their government is in a good position and start taking matters into their own hands.
I agree that people are losing faith on the government. I think if they all stood up and make there voice heard they could make a difference. I'd recommend you to next time to not combine many sentences together with commas. Great job combining the quotes nicely.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you that this country has to make a change, but I am not sure if you are for Obamacare or not. Maybe you should explain your side of the story more.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you about people losing faith. I think that with people losing faith it will start something big. The only problem with your article is that you need to explain your side a little more and also you need to break it up. You did good explain Obama care. Other than that you did a great job.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the tip on explaining myself a little more! I will try to on my next current event. Thanks for reading my post and commenting.
DeleteHey, great blog post and good combining the quotes. I agree with you that people are losing faith for the government and that the country has to make a change. I think you had to many commas and I also believe you need to add just a little more about your opinion towards Obama care. I have a question what was the author's purpose of this article? also who did the author want to reach out to? who was the article for?
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my post! I like the tip for putting more of my opinion into it. Ill try that next time. I don't really remember about the article too much, I wrote it last year.
DeleteI understand. Good luck on your next blog.
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